如何短期内提高雅思写作水平？

        短期内提高雅思写作水平？雅思写作对于中国考生来说很难，这主要是因为中国人与外国人的写作行文逻辑不通，所以想要提高雅思写作成绩，首先我们要提升自己的作文逻辑，其次是减少语法的错误，这样比用高级句型更容易高分。

       一、雅思写作题型

       雅思写作共有部分，分别是大作文和小作文。给你一个折线图、饼图或柱形，以及一些数据，你需要根据这些东西写一篇文章，将你从图然后去然后数据中分析到的信息全部写出来还文章。有一种被一个顽固的山峰的图示

       二、雅思写作评分标准

       1.任务响应（任务响应情况）

       2.Coherence and Cohesion（连贯与流量）

       3.词法资源（词汇的不同程度）

       4.语法范围和准确度（语法及准确度）

       想要在雅思尝试中取得好成绩，那么我们在备考的时候一定要按照雅思写作评分标准去备考，平时多看、多背、多远，一定多想写，你再看不去写你永远也不知道自己水平如何，写完要去找老师去修改，否则你也不会知道自己错在哪，文章哪里写的好等等。

       接下来我们来看一篇雅思范文：

       Zoos are sometimes seen as necessary but poor alternative to a natural environment. Is it necessary to keep animals in zoos?

In the modern society, zoos are almost indispensable places in large cities for people to visit. In some large zoos, there are various animals from space to sea, and from primitive invertebrates to advanced and intelligent mammals. In the zoos, all animals, including those rare animals, such as panda, Africa elephant, and North-East tiger, could enjoy good care and protection away from any hurt. However, along with the stronger natural environmental protection consciousness, many people think that to put animals into small cages will change their living instincts, and therefore break the ecological balance.
Viewed from the basic relations between animals and human beings, animals should have the equal freedom with human beings. They are all forms of life. Animals have their own living instinct, and it is this instinct that forms the biological chain of the Earth. This relation is called "Ecological Balance" academically. For example, insect-bird-snake. If most birds in a region are killed and locked into cages by human beings, the pests will eat out all crops, and snakes will lose a large part of food (bird)-resources, therefore leading to starvation and death.

This opinion sounds ideal theoretically. However in reality, human beings and other animals cannot stay together peacefully on the Earth. Because of human beings' lust for fortune, many valuable animals are killed or sold, especially those endangered species. Therefore, zoos appear as an active way for people to protect those poor animals. First, this is an action not only for animals but also for human being itself. Once the biological chain is broken, human beings will be punished inevitably. Next, zoos can serve a purpose of educating and entertaining people, narrowing the distance between human beings and animals. Last, zoos can be a scientific study center to rescue more endangered spices and make animals better serve people's need.
The key point of this topic is freedom or protection. In my opinion, those two aspects can be unified. It is necessary to keep animals in zoos for the purpose of protection, teaching and study. Let's think it further, the purpose of all these actions is to make animals live happier, therefore, maintain the ecological balance, hence protect our own living environment.

至于这篇文章的点评这里就不再多说了，如果你还不会写做，如果还偷到低分，那么就来思润吧！